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Thursday, January 7, 2010

55 Fiction - 1



Aakash was riding his 160cc bike at the slowest possible speed cause he was in no hurry... Ria said from behind,


"Shame on you... Look, that ricksaw puller is going faster than you"



Aakash felt an insult... overtaking the ricksaw puller.. stopped him and said, 

"Why are you pedaling so fast, can't you go slow.."



(P.S.: My first attempt at 55 fiction. Inspiration - Mahesh & other bloggers. For those who are unaware about 55 fiction. - It is a fictitious story to be said within 55 words.)



3 comments:

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hehe....That was the funniest F55 i read ever. Too good..Literally asking the rickshaw walla for pedaling faster?? ;-) Very nice....it must have been a sudden thought in ur mind ;-) Keep going..

Awww..I inspired you? Hmmmmm *raising collar* :-)


Cheers
Mahesh

Preeti Rana said...

hehe...good..
i came to know what is 55 fiction...the concept is really interesting.

Atulya said...

@ Mahesh: thanx a ton

@ Preeti: Thanx..